Ellie W takes the role of Eva who survived on the Titanic

Great writing in just the right style!

Titanic Doomed: Y5 Caitlin C

Superb pieces of writing where Caitlin has actively used her targets and considered what I was looking for.

Titanic Sank Y5 Sumara

Sumara's hard work is clearly paying off here...

Historic voyage ends in a titanic fail... Blake Y5

VERY good writing indeed!

I love the way Blake remembered to jot in the margin what he was going to try and use and ticked it off as he wrote.

Titanic Tragedy from Y5

2 cracking pieces of writing in Max's usual entertaining style!

Titanic Tragedy Recount Letter

See how Megan in Y5 has used a green pen to improve her work and a green highlighter to show off the use of her targets which help her hit the next level of learning.

Y5 Max being Alex Rider in the jellyfish tank.

Enjoy Max's humorous writing style as he describes being stuck inside the jellyfish tank trying to escape.


Dirty, dirty tank!


When I was stuck in the tank I kept on smashing into the sides. (That is until I noticed that on the sides there was jellyfish leavings firmed onto it!) It appeared that no one had cleared out the sides in ages! Even if I didn’t drown from the water or get killed by the jelly fish I would die in disgust. So I did some quick thinking and burnt the cage broke free and watched the jellyfish eat the evil woman and now she’s dead hooray! 


Despite the fact the jellyfish had helped me I grabbed the harpoon and shot it! (I wish)