Y5 Max being Alex Rider in the jellyfish tank.

Enjoy Max's humorous writing style as he describes being stuck inside the jellyfish tank trying to escape.


Dirty, dirty tank!


When I was stuck in the tank I kept on smashing into the sides. (That is until I noticed that on the sides there was jellyfish leavings firmed onto it!) It appeared that no one had cleared out the sides in ages! Even if I didn’t drown from the water or get killed by the jelly fish I would die in disgust. So I did some quick thinking and burnt the cage broke free and watched the jellyfish eat the evil woman and now she’s dead hooray! 


Despite the fact the jellyfish had helped me I grabbed the harpoon and shot it! (I wish)

Hansel & Gretel swap letters with a witch

Dear wicked witch,

I have to say you are so mean.

Since when have there been a witch that eats children it brought a tear to our eyes it was so evil of you to try and eat us.  You are so lucky that Gretel didn't actually burn you to death.


I am so happy you are in prison for TEN years but if you ever get out I am going to tell dad you are an evil old witch and he may even warn you to leave us alone and get on with life!

From
Hansel and Gretel


Dear Hansel (I suspect it was you that wrote to me)

As I read your letter I began to cry.  I will tell why I tried to eat you.

I was sent a threat letter saying I must catch 2 children and fatten one up if possible the male if there is one.
So I wrote back and asked why I needed to do this and they replied if I didn't they would destroy my wonderful house of sweets and chocolate.

I heard you were being dumped in the woods so I put this strangers plan into action.
I am so sorry if you thought I was an evil old hag.  Really I could never harm a child if I had the choice

Thanks for the letter
Nanny Cloggs


(More hard work from CaitlinM)

Poor Little Red! CaitlinM gets into role again!

Daisy Meadow
Horror wood
BD74 NNP

Dear fairy godmother,

I have been having trouble with life since that terrible day.

Firstly mummy has been very cross with me for speaking to strangers and going off the path.
Granny has not wanted to see me because she was eaten by a giant rabbit!!!

If you can help please reply I am so sad and a bit worried that the rabbit will come back for me.


Thanks for taking time to read this letter please try and think up a way to help me.


Yours truly
Little red riding hood

Caitlin's Goldilocks letters...

You have earned a ClassDojo for these Caitlin.  You are working hard!


Dear the three bears,

I am very sorry about what I did.

Please try and forgive me as I thought the youngest bear would be so friendly to me.
I will replace EVERYTHING I have damaged and get each and every one of you a little something when I go to Blackpool.

If we do make up would you like to come with me. My says yes to everything plus she loves bears what a bonus so please reply to me oh and what time would be suitable to send the furniture to you house.

from Goldilocks
  xxx


Dear Goldilocks,

Thanks for the sob story we will forgive you on one condition you promise to never brake into our house ever again.  Sorry this letter is so short but really we don't know what to say.

We wish you the best of luck in life.

From the three bears
 xxx


P.S Send the furniture at 1.30pm on Friday.

3 little pigs... a different view

Caitlin M in Year 5 has just sent me a fabulous piece of writing taking on a character from the 3 Little Pigs.  


I'll say no more but it's a must read below...

Dear Mummy pig,

I have been desperate to talk to you since... that terrible day. The day I nearly died.


Well, I met a man with some straw and built a house but than a nasty fox came along and blew it down with just one huff and puff.


It was so horrible to see my wonderful house being destroyed by a FOX. I mean... I know the story of the three little pigs having their houses blown down by a wolf but, seriously, a fox! How unoriginal! Since when has there been a fox that can blow a house down? It is just crazy!


Anyway more to the point...  Are you okay? I am fine. I was only in hospital for 2 days.


I know you might not want to talk about him but how is dad? Is he and his goose girlfriend happy? Please, please, please with a cherry on top try and get back with him as it would mean the world to me if you did.


Love loads
Polly pig
xxxxx

The Lost Star, by Katy Y5

It was a stormy night when a twinkling shadow fell from the sky. The shadow fell swiftly into a fast flowing river waiting for someone to find it.

Eight years later a small girl was born.  Her thoughtful mother named her Emmalisa. She had long golden hair that glimmered in any weather. When Emmalisa was only nine she was surprisingly the most beautiful girl in her home town named the Golden City which was named after the sparkling stars in the night sky.

Because Emmalisa was so small she never got to see the stars. So one night Emmalisa secretly slipped out of her room to see the stars .She crept down the creaky stairs and went into the kitchen. Emmalisa (who was still in her spotty pyjamas) slowly reached into the cupboard and grabbed the metal keys that opened the front door. Emmalisa crept outside and locked the door behind her and left the keys in the lock.

After Emmalisa had walked for a couple of minutes she stopped in front of a vast, flowing river there was no way of getting to the over side so she turned around and headed for home. Then Emmalisa looked up at the night sky to see that there were no stars at. All Emmalisa could see was total darkness. But then out of the corner of her eye she saw a light shining at the bottom of the endless river. Emmalisa closed her eye thinking it was all a dream.  Then she opened them.  It wasn’t…

Without thinking Emmalisa jumped into the river! What she didn’t know was that the giant river was so cold but it was too late. Emmalisa was already in. Emmalisa plunged into the racing rapids, closing her eyes as she slowly drifted to the bottom! A few seconds later she opened her eyes to see that she was still under the water. Emmalisa reached out and grabbed the glowing light. Emmalisa suddenly panicked as she saw a dark shadow moving towards her.  She quickly swam to the surface gasping wildly for air.  Her hands were still clutched together. Emmalisa gradually made her way to the edge of the river as she shivered. Then she leaned over the side trying not to fall in.  Then Emmalisa saw the dark shadow was only a small fish.

As Emmalisa walked home she felt something moving in her hand.  She tried to ignore it but it was so hard not to so she opened her hand and saw the  light that she had found in the river. Before she could say a word the light shot up into the sky like a bullet. Emmalisa looked up in surprise to see all the stars were back shining as normal. Emmalisa didn’t know what to say so she just ran back to her house to see her mum and dad waiting there.

The next morning Emmalisa woke up still trying to figure out what had happened that night.

The Last Hope by Blake, Y5

10 years ago something that could change the world forever happened... one man defeated the blood sucking dolls and the ghost pirates. They were going to take over the entire world forever, but this man had no fear. He set off at the exact date of the 31^st January 2002. This is the year that they called the scariest of all. This man set off feeling brave and buoyant.  But little did he know what was in store for him on his very long journey ahead. He had the power to do anything with the world.

 When he was out of the city he heard a strange noise coming from behind him. “What was it?” he thought.   Then the thing behind him pounced at him menacingly.

The thing hit him so hard he got knocked out, so the beast dragged him away. When he woke up he was in a strange, rotting place with bones scattered all over. He gulped hard trembling with fear. He thought that this was the end of him and most importantly, the quest! But when he observed the beast he noticed that it was sleeping. Then he saw that the door was open. This was his chance to escape! Now he knew that his quest and his life were not over.

But just as he got up, the beast heard him and quickly got up to stop him from escaping! He gasped, but then he built up confidence and fought bare handed! The beast was tough but that didn’t stop him from fighting, and with one punch on the nose the beast was defeated. He felt undefeatable. “No one can stop me,” he thought. “I am invincible!” Then he noticed an immense mountain so he decided to climb up it,” This is taking forever” he said to himself. Finally he reached a cave full of bats and just beneath the bats he saw a cryptic door.

On the door there was a picture of a skull and crossbones and a doll with blood in its mouth. This must be the secret base of the bad creatures. “But how do I get inside? There must be a way!” Then he remembered that he could do anything,  so he made a sarsen come and break down the door,  “It worked!” he said in joy “This might actually come in handy.” So with that he entered the mammoth humid base covered in blood and bodies. Then he heard a doll coming his way, “I’m doomed!” he whispered

Then, just around the corner, came a whole bunch of blood sucking dolls.  “Shall I escape or shall I fight?” he thought . Then he started to battle the beast. The first hit was from the beast but in his pocket he found a knife so he used it against them and won. Then came the pirates but when they saw the dead dolls they got terrified and went to hell.

Will you remember 2002?