Paige's fabulous Upside Down film ending

Spinning into space by JoshH in Y5

We watched a short film about someone who didn't get pulled by gravity.  One day, they disappeared into space.  Here's Josh's fabulous description about what happened.  I love the question at the end. What do you like about it?

I found myself spinning upwards.  Higher and higher.  When I looked around, a gigantic earth tornado was spinning at me. I was in a dark, dense place it was like a black hole . I glanced at earth it looked 390,000 to240,000 miles away . I couldn’t be that far away could  I? 

Fabulous start to the Y5 term

Year 5 have all begun well; showing off their writing skills.

Here's a great example of Adam 'talking to the audience.' Brilliant!

Plus... fantastic editing with a green pen from Milla. We're on a roll!

Fantasy shoe stories

 

We enjoyed inspecting our shoe and answering questions about it.  After doing a detailed drawing, we made a rough copy of our shoe and turned it into a fantasy design.  Take a look at our brilliant art work!  We didn't stop there...  We then imagined walking down the stairs, falling into our shoe and ending up in our fantasy land.  Enjoy reading the comments in this post to find out our individual stories.  

Of course, we tried to use our targets so you should be able to spot good openers and language choice as you read them!

Persuasive explanation from Levi

See how Levi has used his targets this week, wrote a very considered piece and very carefully edited his work. Brilliant!

The Unsinkable - SUNK Y5 Alisha

Delightful style like you really are Eva and there really is Jane reading your letter. Check out the detail... Even the address is thought through! Which newspaper are you going to be editing? I think you could have a successful writing career ahead!

Ellie W takes the role of Eva who survived on the Titanic

Great writing in just the right style!