The Lost Star, by Katy Y5

It was a stormy night when a twinkling shadow fell from the sky. The shadow fell swiftly into a fast flowing river waiting for someone to find it.

Eight years later a small girl was born.  Her thoughtful mother named her Emmalisa. She had long golden hair that glimmered in any weather. When Emmalisa was only nine she was surprisingly the most beautiful girl in her home town named the Golden City which was named after the sparkling stars in the night sky.

Because Emmalisa was so small she never got to see the stars. So one night Emmalisa secretly slipped out of her room to see the stars .She crept down the creaky stairs and went into the kitchen. Emmalisa (who was still in her spotty pyjamas) slowly reached into the cupboard and grabbed the metal keys that opened the front door. Emmalisa crept outside and locked the door behind her and left the keys in the lock.

After Emmalisa had walked for a couple of minutes she stopped in front of a vast, flowing river there was no way of getting to the over side so she turned around and headed for home. Then Emmalisa looked up at the night sky to see that there were no stars at. All Emmalisa could see was total darkness. But then out of the corner of her eye she saw a light shining at the bottom of the endless river. Emmalisa closed her eye thinking it was all a dream.  Then she opened them.  It wasn’t…

Without thinking Emmalisa jumped into the river! What she didn’t know was that the giant river was so cold but it was too late. Emmalisa was already in. Emmalisa plunged into the racing rapids, closing her eyes as she slowly drifted to the bottom! A few seconds later she opened her eyes to see that she was still under the water. Emmalisa reached out and grabbed the glowing light. Emmalisa suddenly panicked as she saw a dark shadow moving towards her.  She quickly swam to the surface gasping wildly for air.  Her hands were still clutched together. Emmalisa gradually made her way to the edge of the river as she shivered. Then she leaned over the side trying not to fall in.  Then Emmalisa saw the dark shadow was only a small fish.

As Emmalisa walked home she felt something moving in her hand.  She tried to ignore it but it was so hard not to so she opened her hand and saw the  light that she had found in the river. Before she could say a word the light shot up into the sky like a bullet. Emmalisa looked up in surprise to see all the stars were back shining as normal. Emmalisa didn’t know what to say so she just ran back to her house to see her mum and dad waiting there.

The next morning Emmalisa woke up still trying to figure out what had happened that night.

The Last Hope by Blake, Y5

10 years ago something that could change the world forever happened... one man defeated the blood sucking dolls and the ghost pirates. They were going to take over the entire world forever, but this man had no fear. He set off at the exact date of the 31^st January 2002. This is the year that they called the scariest of all. This man set off feeling brave and buoyant.  But little did he know what was in store for him on his very long journey ahead. He had the power to do anything with the world.

 When he was out of the city he heard a strange noise coming from behind him. “What was it?” he thought.   Then the thing behind him pounced at him menacingly.

The thing hit him so hard he got knocked out, so the beast dragged him away. When he woke up he was in a strange, rotting place with bones scattered all over. He gulped hard trembling with fear. He thought that this was the end of him and most importantly, the quest! But when he observed the beast he noticed that it was sleeping. Then he saw that the door was open. This was his chance to escape! Now he knew that his quest and his life were not over.

But just as he got up, the beast heard him and quickly got up to stop him from escaping! He gasped, but then he built up confidence and fought bare handed! The beast was tough but that didn’t stop him from fighting, and with one punch on the nose the beast was defeated. He felt undefeatable. “No one can stop me,” he thought. “I am invincible!” Then he noticed an immense mountain so he decided to climb up it,” This is taking forever” he said to himself. Finally he reached a cave full of bats and just beneath the bats he saw a cryptic door.

On the door there was a picture of a skull and crossbones and a doll with blood in its mouth. This must be the secret base of the bad creatures. “But how do I get inside? There must be a way!” Then he remembered that he could do anything,  so he made a sarsen come and break down the door,  “It worked!” he said in joy “This might actually come in handy.” So with that he entered the mammoth humid base covered in blood and bodies. Then he heard a doll coming his way, “I’m doomed!” he whispered

Then, just around the corner, came a whole bunch of blood sucking dolls.  “Shall I escape or shall I fight?” he thought . Then he started to battle the beast. The first hit was from the beast but in his pocket he found a knife so he used it against them and won. Then came the pirates but when they saw the dead dolls they got terrified and went to hell.

Will you remember 2002? 

The Crystal by Levi, Y5

One ordinary boy called Jonathan found a teleporter in an old shack. It was all rusty and looked very old.  It was silver and gold.  Jonathan ran in the teleporter and ZAP! In a flash of lightning Jonathan was gone. Jonathan had gone where nobody has ever discovered before. Jonathon thought it was marvellous but suddenly he heard an echoing sound coming from beneath him (he assumed).   What’s  that? He went to see what it was.  When he went down a rocky path, he saw a scaled monster. It was as smooth as a cotton fleece with hands as light as a feather and it had a big round black nose with a tremendously long tail. 

Jonathan wondered if he would have to kill it before it killed him so he ran away to a cold, damp grey cave.  Inside the cave Jonathan laid down to try to get some sleep, but he saw a shiny, see-through green crystal. It was the most powerful source ever made.  He picked it up and it turned all his arms, legs and his body into crystal.  He could shoot crystals out of his hands and when he slipped it now wouldn’t hurt him. He was so powerful that he could pick up a fully grown tree. One day he found a tremendously big griffin.  So he thought that he would be smart about this.  He slyly crept up to the griffin and pounced on the griffin and grabbed its hair and went for a ride on it. Up they went  but on the way there Jonathan spotted a hovering marine ship but there weren’t just marines in the ship.  They were robot marines.  They were gold and red with a sparkling yellow machine gun.  They were heavily armoured with a helmet as strong as steel.  Jonathan did not know that they saw him.  Suddenly the marines slid down a rope.  There was silence but then there was war.  The commander announced, “Attack!”

The herd of marines ran towards him. Jonathan started to fire the crystals out of his hands but there were just too many of them.  Jonathan had an idea.  He pointed his crystals at the sun so the brightness blinded the marines but it didn’t stop them.  They just kept on running towards him.  Jonathan started to run towards them.  He started to kill them with a grin on his face.  He threw them all over the place.  He tore them to pieces and stabbed them all over.  Finally there was one soldier left... the captain. All of a sudden his crystal was out of power.  He transformed into his normal self.  The captain bellowed out loud saying, “You put my soldiers through all this!”

The captain was so mad he shot the boy in the neck but Jonathan still had some power left in him.  Jonathan picked up his crystal and stabbed him.

Jonathan died with pride.