Wednesday, 8 February 2012

The Last Hope by Blake, Y5


10 years ago something that could change the world forever happened... one man defeated the blood sucking dolls and the ghost pirates. They were going to take over the entire world forever, but this man had no fear. He set off at the exact date of the 31st January 2002. This is the year that they called the scariest of all. This man set off feeling brave and buoyant.  But little did he know what was in store for him on his very long journey ahead. He had the power to do anything with the world.

 When he was out of the city he heard a strange noise coming from behind him. “What was it?” he thought.   Then the thing behind him pounced at him menacingly.

The thing hit him so hard he got knocked out, so the beast dragged him away. When he woke up he was in a strange, rotting place with bones scattered all over. He gulped hard trembling with fear. He thought that this was the end of him and most importantly, the quest! But when he observed the beast he noticed that it was sleeping. Then he saw that the door was open. This was his chance to escape! Now he knew that his quest and his life were not over.

But just as he got up, the beast heard him and quickly got up to stop him from escaping! He gasped, but then he built up confidence and fought bare handed! The beast was tough but that didn’t stop him from fighting, and with one punch on the nose the beast was defeated. He felt undefeatable. “No one can stop me,” he thought. “I am invincible!” Then he noticed an immense mountain so he decided to climb up it,” This is taking forever” he said to himself. Finally he reached a cave full of bats and just beneath the bats he saw a cryptic door.

On the door there was a picture of a skull and crossbones and a doll with blood in its mouth. This must be the secret base of the bad creatures. “But how do I get inside? There must be a way!” Then he remembered that he could do anything,  so he made a sarsen come and break down the door,  “It worked!” he said in joy “This might actually come in handy.” So with that he entered the mammoth humid base covered in blood and bodies. Then he heard a doll coming his way, “I’m doomed!” he whispered

Then, just around the corner, came a whole bunch of blood sucking dolls.  “Shall I escape or shall I fight?” he thought . Then he started to battle the beast. The first hit was from the beast but in his pocket he found a knife so he used it against them and won. Then came the pirates but when they saw the dead dolls they got terrified and went to hell.

Will you remember 2002? 

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