The Crystal by Levi, Y5

One ordinary boy called Jonathan found a teleporter in an old shack. It was all rusty and looked very old.  It was silver and gold.  Jonathan ran in the teleporter and ZAP! In a flash of lightning Jonathan was gone. Jonathan had gone where nobody has ever discovered before. Jonathon thought it was marvellous but suddenly he heard an echoing sound coming from beneath him (he assumed).   What’s  that? He went to see what it was.  When he went down a rocky path, he saw a scaled monster. It was as smooth as a cotton fleece with hands as light as a feather and it had a big round black nose with a tremendously long tail. 

Jonathan wondered if he would have to kill it before it killed him so he ran away to a cold, damp grey cave.  Inside the cave Jonathan laid down to try to get some sleep, but he saw a shiny, see-through green crystal. It was the most powerful source ever made.  He picked it up and it turned all his arms, legs and his body into crystal.  He could shoot crystals out of his hands and when he slipped it now wouldn’t hurt him. He was so powerful that he could pick up a fully grown tree. One day he found a tremendously big griffin.  So he thought that he would be smart about this.  He slyly crept up to the griffin and pounced on the griffin and grabbed its hair and went for a ride on it. Up they went  but on the way there Jonathan spotted a hovering marine ship but there weren’t just marines in the ship.  They were robot marines.  They were gold and red with a sparkling yellow machine gun.  They were heavily armoured with a helmet as strong as steel.  Jonathan did not know that they saw him.  Suddenly the marines slid down a rope.  There was silence but then there was war.  The commander announced, “Attack!”

The herd of marines ran towards him. Jonathan started to fire the crystals out of his hands but there were just too many of them.  Jonathan had an idea.  He pointed his crystals at the sun so the brightness blinded the marines but it didn’t stop them.  They just kept on running towards him.  Jonathan started to run towards them.  He started to kill them with a grin on his face.  He threw them all over the place.  He tore them to pieces and stabbed them all over.  Finally there was one soldier left... the captain. All of a sudden his crystal was out of power.  He transformed into his normal self.  The captain bellowed out loud saying, “You put my soldiers through all this!”

The captain was so mad he shot the boy in the neck but Jonathan still had some power left in him.  Jonathan picked up his crystal and stabbed him.

Jonathan died with pride.