Monday, 16 January 2012

The door of doom

Caitlin M worked on this at home. What a fabulous and entertaining story.  Well done! 


The door of doom

Once in a vast city a family lived. There was a mum, a dad and 3 children, but there was something not quite right about their home. There was a door that was always locked and had never been opened. The children were called Electra, Zoe and Tammie and they were very curious about what might be behind the door. One of them (Zoe) even tried to open the door just for a quick look but it was like steel. Although they had been told never to go into the room they were always writing in their old school books and thinking about what might be behind the mysterious door. One idea was that it was full of little evil elves that were planning on taking over the world and turn everyone into frogs (except girls of course) or maybe a lion that was so hungry when it came out it would scoff everything in sight WARNING: Including humans. 
But the best idea was that it was a little pixy from the end of the rainbow and it had the biggest pot of gold ever and gave everyone £20,000.


These ideas probably weren’t right but still the 3 of them spent hours and hours making up stories of what might happen if they ever opened the door!

One cold Saturday morning the Electra woke up to the sweet smell of bacon, eggs, sausage and fried toast. This was the most glories smell ever she sat up and shot down the stairs and saw a fresh fry up laid on the table. So she took her seat and began to eat this mouth-watering breakfast.

Later that day her mum came out and told her to go to the posh shop (this is the name of the shop) and pick up some new earrings for her and Electra wondered why.


As she returned with Zoe and Tammie they heard a boom from an unknown place. It came from a place in the house that was for sure so they sprinted up the stairs to the locked door. It was open and ebony black is what they saw and started to wander in… 


As they approached the door knob a creak came from inside the room and the quickly ran in and saw…………

NOTHING it was black and full of boxes how would they find anything in this room it was so bad Tammie fell over and landed on something that wasn’t hard and wasn’t soft it was both.  They ran out of the room and got torches they raced up the stairs to find something enormous in the corner and they walked slowly towards it

The THING they found was wet and slimy well wet and snotty. This unusual thing sneezed and blue bogeys splatted all over the girls and they screamed with discuss and the animal of some sort said “sorry I have a, a, a”
“Oh no” screamed all the girls together and they ducked like a lightning flash just as blue bogies splashed all over the walls of the room.
“Who are you” asked Zoe 
“Well I, I, I… false alarm!”
“Good.” Electra said 
“Any how I am professor Bluetrue the goblin AND I WANT TO GO HOME!”
“Okay we will help you how can we get you home”
“Well you need to cure my sneezes and I can get home myself”
“How do we cure your sneezes then” Asked Zoe
“With medicine of course my oh my where do you come from America?”
“What normal medicine like our medicine”
“Yes what other kind of medicine”


So the girls rushed off and got cold medicine and cough medicine luckily they worked and soon professor Bluetrue was home again
(Hopefully)


P.S if you see a green looking elf that sneezes blue bogies than put him in a spacious place you don’t want to be carrying blue bogies all the way back to the girls home do you!!!

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